Saturday 16 September 2017

Room 9's 'What am I?' Haiku poems

Room 9's Poetry

"Haiku" is a traditional form of Japanese poetry.  Haiku poems consist of 3 lines.  The first and last lines of a Haiku have 5 syllables and the middle line has 7 syllables.  The lines rarely rhyme.

Here's a Haiku to help you remember:

I am first with five
Then seven in the middle --
Five again to end.

On Friday Room 9 discussed dividing words into syllables and making sure that we followed the Haiku structure. Because Haikus are such short poems, they are usually written about things that are recognizable to the reader.

We decided that our first attempt at writing Haikus were going to be a "What am I?" Haiku.  These act like a riddle. After we wrote our Haikus, we guessed what each poet was describing.


We hope you enjoy our poems. (There are more to come...)



I like to bite bones,
I can be fun to play with
I like to run jump.
By Rose

It has a long neck,
I have yellow dots on me
I live in a zoo.
By Eilish

I like to eat meat
I have a poisonous bite
I am a reptile
By Cyrus


I like to eat leaves.    
I am quite tall and skinny.
I have a long neck.
By Emilia

I swim to keep cool
I have stripes on my body
I can be vicious
By Liam H

I am black and white
I do not live in the zoo
I live in different places
By Liam B

I am very scary
I like to eat  food a lot
I can get angry
By Matthew


I have six long legs.
I have red underneth me.
I am small and black.
By Charlie

At  night I will fly  
At day I sleep upside down       
I have two sharp teeth
By Tom

I am black and white
I eat a lot of bamboo
I am quite chubby
By Storm

I love to eat ants,
I get it from piles of dirt
I have a long nose.
By Molly

I like to chew bones,
I can sleep both day and night
I like to bark a lot.
By Savanna

I can be black and
I can be trained and also
I can run quite fast
By Rubi-Lee

Squirt ink amazing
Eight arms so incredible
Who am I haha
By Simon

I am a bit small,
I like to swing from branches
I love bananas.
By Maddie

I am black and white
I have yellow on my neck
I eat fish a lot
By Sophie

I am different
I am quite cute and fluffy
Sometimes I can scratch.
By Milan

I can ran quite fast          
I can pounce high in the grass      
I eat animals    
By Xander

Sharp claws and sharp teeth
I am a bad canirove,
I am a creature.
By Blake

I am quite scary
I have black and orange stripes,
I have very sharp claws.
By Logan

I  love bananas
I like swinging on tall trees,
There is different kinds.
By Noah

My mane is shiny  
Hooves that glint and shimmer bright
My tail is glossy
By Adele

I like to jump high
I like to play fetch with sticks
I like to lick bones
By Hayden

Yellow and spotty,
Fast as an amazing car.
I live where it’s hot.
By Isaac

I run super fast,
Black dots and yellow fur too,
I am dangerous.
By Bella

I am a reptile
I have scales and I lay eggs
I’m a crocodile
By Isla